Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Category A, Response C -- Foreshadowing in Lumberjanes

One instance of foreshadowing in Lumberjanes is the crystal found in the camp director’s cabin. It is first shown in a scene in which Ripley, a happy-go-lucky, careless character, is split from the group while using the restroom, and is seen again when the group falls into the magical cave. In the first scene, the inclusion of the gem simply signals the reader that adventure may await because an entire panel is dedicated to Ripley staring at it. Then, when the crystals reappear in the cave, something more sinister is implied. The connection, ignored by Ripley due to her aforementioned carelessness, signals that something is wrong with the camp director to the reader because it implies a connection between the director and the underground cave. What the connection is, however, is left unknown.
This decision works primarily to elevate the tension within the story. Because of the power that the camp director is assumed to hold, having her as an ally would make the girls seem less responsible for solving the overarching mystery. Like a parent or Dumbledore in the earlier books of the Harry Potter series, having her around lightens everyone else’s burden because it feels like she can, at any time, jump in and solve any problem. However, since she is not guaranteed to be an ally, the reader is allowed to suspend disbelief and not wonder why the girls don’t seek the director’s help. Even though the girls don’t know of the director’s suspicious activities, the reader knows, and thus the girls’ independent activities seem more reasonable.
Furthermore, the existence of the crystals also generate uncertainty regarding the plot. Without them, the director of the boys’ camp seems like the obvious villain. If that were the case, the narrative would feel linear or unjustified. Either the male director is truly the antagonist and the story is predictable, or another character is revealed to be a puppetmaster and the reveal feels like a deus ex plot point. By casting suspicion on the female director, the reader is thus forced onto more interesting ground. Even if the male director turns out to be the antagonist, the connection between the directors would have to be explored.

Overall, including the crystals generates more options for the story to choose from, creating a more interesting reading experience. 

2 comments:

  1. I think you did an excellent job raising up the purpose of the gem. It's something I want to look into more as I read this comic again.

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  2. Hi Liren,

    Your response thoughtfully explores one of the open-ended mysteries in Vol. 1. I have not read beyond this volume yet, so I do not know what is going on with the camp director, but I do agree that her potential complicity in all of this both grants the Lumberjanes more agency and juxtaposes the two camp directors. Since we already know the male director to be sinister and controlling, it casts even further doubts on our female leader. If she does turn out to be compromised, that would grant even further power to the girl scouts. If she is a hero, then it might suggest something about female vs. male leadership, but we can't know which it is yet.

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