Nicole
LaReau
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Post #1
Prompt
A/A
Fear is a primal instinct of life; therefore it be a driving
theme of literature. Fear factors in heavily to the storyline of the Chocolate
War, as most of the actions of the characters involved are based on fear. The
fear created from the Vigils’ actions drives their continual bullying, while
the fear from their victims creates a culture of obedience. This cycle fuels
the whole plotline of the story, as well illustrates one of the elemtal forces
of adolescence: peer pressure. The whole novel is about who is in control, and
how they exercise this elemental force within the confines of their little
universe. The second chapter especially reinforces this theme of fear. Archie,
the head of the Vigils, is introduced to the reader in the second chapter, and
the author begins to set up the complex of fear and control that Archie
exercises over his little kingdom. Archie’s bullying ways are revealed early,
especially in this passage as he and Obie have an aggressive and hostile
conversation in which Archie’s intellectual prowess is revealed. Obie’s fear of
Archie’s intellect is seen during their argument, as well as in how subservient
Obie is towards Archie as his “personal assistant”. Archie also exhibits
behavior reminiscent of a god complex, as he sits around deciding other’s fates
without their knowledge and dictating his commands to Obie. Archie assumes the
compliance of the mere mortals of whom he is commanding because he is confident
the fear they have of him will prompt their actions. This part of the novel
also details just exactly how Archie instills fear in his victims: through
pyschological intimidation versus phsycial intimidation. It proves more
powerful, and also slides underneath the radar of the educational,
instituational world that they are operating within. All of the Vigils’ (and
indirectly Archie’s) assignments operate under the assumption that the primal
force of fear is enough to drive their victims to action. Jerry later upsets
this assumption, but this passage describes a crucial part of how the small
universe of fear of Archie sets up an expectation of a fear culture.
Hi Nicole,
ReplyDeleteYou are right that fear and the difference between physical intimidation and psychological intimidation are major themes in the novel, and Archie's character encapsulates this theme. I would like to see some paragraph breaks even though it is such a short length, and it would be more helpful to include specific quotes and scene references to more closely anchor your reading.